Be careful: A Real Estate Grammar Error to Avoid

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Services for Real Estate Pros with Marte Cliff Copywriting

It’s been a while since I nagged about the importance of grammar in your blog posts, letters, and emails to clients. Therefore, it must be time to revisit the subject.

It is important. In fact, studies such as those conducted at North Carolina Stategrammar matters in real estate University, the University of Michigan, and Undercover Recruiter, found that readers judge strangers in an unfavorable light simply because of writing errors.

And when it comes to real estate, clients are wise to be leery if you don’t know your way around words. After all, when you help them write purchase offers or counter-offers, the words must be clear. There is no room for misunderstandings.

That means it pays to polish your skills and to not allow yourself to fall into poor grammatical habits.

You may or may not know that I wrote an e-book entitledA Grammar Guide for Real Estate Agents.”   The Grammar Guide outlines the most common mistakes made by real estate agents.

However, just today I realized that I missed one. (Guess I’ll have to do a revised edition of the Guide.)

Here’s the common grammar error that I forgot to mention: Incomplete Comparisons.

What is an incomplete comparison?incomplete

It reads something like this:

·      The house on Main and 2nd is classier.

·      My new listing clients are more motivated.

·      Jerry is happier and more relaxed.

Each of these statements is incomplete because it leaves the reader with an unanswered question. “Than what?” Or “than whom?” As for Jerry, the question might be “Than he was when?”

You could cure these errors by answering the question, or by altering the statements.

·      The house on Main and 2nd is classier than the one on Main and 3rd.

·      My new listing clients are more motivated than my other sellers.

·      Jerry is happier and more relaxed than he was last week.

Or…

·      In my opinion, the house on Main and 2nd is classy.

·      My new listing clients are motivated to sell quickly.

·      Jerry is happy and relaxed, now that (whatever happened).

The bottom line: Don’t leave your readers hanging, wondering what you meant.

If you aren’t sure of your own grammar skills, do get a copy of my "Grammar Guide for Real Estate Agents.”   

It will alert you to the most common errors so that you’ll recognize them when you see them – or write them! Then it will give you some hints and “mind tricks” to help you remember the correct way to write something.

For instance: One of the most common errors I see goes something like: “Thanks for the advise.” Of course the word “advise” is wrong. That’s a verb. The sentence needed “advice,” which is a noun. The easy way to remember this one is to remember “ice.” Ice is a noun. You can give it to someone, just like you can give them advice.

Happy writing!  

Comments (34)

Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Endre Barath, Jr. Thanks for the giggle.

I see SO many instances of backward sentences like that -  on line, in newspapers, and in the books I read. Sometimes I have to stop and read it over to figure out what they meant.

Sep 16, 2023 11:19 AM
Roy Kelley
Retired - Gaithersburg, MD

This is very good advice to share.

I hope you will message me when I make mistakes in my posts.

Sep 16, 2023 12:13 PM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Roy Kelley If I see a mistake in one of your posts, it will be a first! 

Sep 16, 2023 01:15 PM
Kathy Streib
Cypress, TX
Home Stager/Redesign

Sep 16, 2023 07:11 PM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Thank you Kathy Streib - inclusion in your post is always an honor. 

Sep 16, 2023 07:44 PM
Dorie Dillard Austin TX
Coldwell Banker Realty ~ 512.750.6899 - Austin, TX
NW Austin ~ Canyon Creek and Spicewood/Balcones

Good morning Marte Cliff ,

I don't know how I missed your post! I'm so glad that Kathy Streib featured it in her "Ah-Ha" moments for the week. I see so many use advise win a sentence and it makes me cringe when it clearly should be advice!

Sep 17, 2023 07:28 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Dorie Dillard Austin TX I think that one has to be just a spelling error. If they read what they wrote out loud, surely they would choose the correct word!

I don't know, but it always makes me cringe.

Sep 17, 2023 07:33 AM
Sheri Sperry - MCNE®
Coldwell Banker Realty - Sedona, AZ
(928) 274-7355 ~ YOUR Solutions REALTOR®

Hi Marte Cliff - I had a fabulous 7th grade English teacher in Texas, and learned so much from her.  But, with the advent of AI, I have been using Grammarly Pro for the last three years.  It is well worth the money.  You can't spell-check or check your grammar yourself.  You made the error and will most likely skip right over it!

Also, I agree with Endre Barath, Jr., that many (significantly younger) individuals do not know if something is grammatically correct unless they use AI.  

Sep 17, 2023 10:06 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Sheri Sperry - MCNE® - I was fortunate to have a Mom and a Grandmother who would correct me if I misspoke. And... the first 7 years of school in a private school where all of the teachers taught grammar with every lesson. 

Whether people know grammar or not is heavily influenced by where you live. In our small North Idaho community, bad grammar is the norm and the teachers aren't much better than the rest of the population. I recall a letter to the editor that stated "Myself and my friends stood outside..." It was written by a 4th grade teacher who was berating the community for not supporting the latest school levy.

I once asked my son's 2nd grade teacher why she didn't correct a student's grammar after he said "Me and my brother went to..." She said it would be insulting to the parents, because that was the way they spoke.

I agree that it is difficult to proofread your own work! 

Sep 17, 2023 11:15 AM
Jeff Dowler, CRS
eXp Realty of California, Inc. - Carlsbad, CA
The Southern California Relocation Dude

Thank you for the grammar lesson, Marte. You always share good tips to keep us on our toes.

Jeff

Sep 17, 2023 03:56 PM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Thanks Jeff Dowler, CRS. I try!  

Sep 17, 2023 04:27 PM
Richard Weeks
Dallas, TX
REALTOR®, Broker
Great information, thanks for sharing.  I hope you have a great day.
Sep 18, 2023 04:02 AM
Marte Cliff

Thank you Richard Weeks. I wish you a great day as well. 

Sep 18, 2023 08:24 AM
Carol Williams
Although I'm retired, I love sharing my knowledge and learning from other real estate industry professionals. - Wenatchee, WA
Retired Agent / Broker / Prop. Mgr, Wenatchee, WA

Hi Marte,
I missed this when it was published, so glad Kathy Streib Featured it in her weekly post.

Grammar does matter. And, you know what else matters... Using vulgar language in everyday conversation. When did that become ok for otherwise educated people?

Sep 18, 2023 05:54 AM
Marte Cliff

Carol - I agree about it changing a person's opinion. Our language makes a statement about who we are. Why wouldn't / shouldn't other people pay attention to that statement? 

Sep 18, 2023 10:14 AM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Carol Williams - I don't know, but I don't like it.

Ever since I was a teen I've had the opinion that people who had to use foul language were trying to look like big shots or tough guys. When I was a kid, I don't recall hearing girls or women talk that way, but now... it's rampant.

I really don't get it.

Sep 18, 2023 08:30 AM
Carol Williams

Marte Cliff 
Foul language has changed my opinion about more than one person.

Sep 18, 2023 09:59 AM
Lise Howe
Keller Williams Capital Properties - Washington, DC
Assoc. Broker in DC, MD, VA and attorney in DC

I am so glad that Kathy Streib featured your post - I missed it before - my teeth are on edge just reading some of your examples~

Sep 19, 2023 06:00 AM
Roy Kelley
Retired - Gaithersburg, MD

May be an image of text that says 'An English professor wrote the words: "A woman without her man is nothing" on the chalkboard and asked the students to punctuate it correctly. All of the males in the class wrote: "A woman, without her man, is nothing." All of the females in the class wrote: "A woman: without her, man is nothing." Punctuation is powerful.'

Sep 19, 2023 06:37 AM
John Juarez
The Medford Real Estate Team - Fremont, CA
ePRO, SRES, GRI, PMN

You may find this funny, Marte Cliff. My wife goes somewhat ballistic when she sees her Facebook friends misspelling words, using the wrong punctuation, incomplete sentences and other grammar errors.

Sep 21, 2023 05:15 PM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Lise Howe - thanks for the giggle. Some of them are pretty cringe-worthy!

 

Sep 21, 2023 07:48 PM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

Roy Kelley I love your perfect example of how punctuation matters! Thanks for enriching this post! 

Sep 21, 2023 07:49 PM
Marte Cliff
Marte Cliff Copywriting - Priest River, ID
Your real estate writer

John Juarez - it doesn't do any good to go ballistic, but I do understand her angst. When people who otherwise seem intelligent slaughter the English language, it hurts! 

Sep 21, 2023 07:56 PM